Music Video progression

Side by side videos from Haydon Media on Vimeo.

This is a comparison between my first, second and final drafts of my music video. Through this video it is clear to see the progression that I have made, not only with small things like colour correction using RGB curves, but also with the placement of clips and the range of footage that I used, especially when comparing my first draft to my final draft.
This video clearly shows how the video has progressed and how any feedback given has been taken into account in order to improve my final product.